Is this a good thesis statement and introduction?

DoungBoy

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My paper is about, Should animal be used for research.- It is a research paper

If you walked in a children hospital and seen kids sick and on the verge of dying, will you kill 10 rats to save those children? Is it animal research or animal cruelty. There are over a million over animals who die each year cause of experimentation but there are millions of people lives save by animal research. So should animals be used for research?
 
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