This is the introduction to my essay about Juliet's courage in order to remain in a relationship with Romeo.
"The true love Romeo and Juliet have impacts both their personalities and relationships with other characters. Much of the play involves the lovers struggle against the public and social society that oppose their love. Both Romeo and Juliet possess unique characteristics that help the marriage between the two stay strong and remain secret. Juliet matures greatly throughout the play considering her age of only 14. One of the characteristics that is shown numerous times is her courageousness. Juliet demonstrates courage when she takes the sleeping potion, proposes marriage to Romeo, and commits suicide in her attempt to be in a relationship with Romeo."
Do you think it's strong enough? If not suggestions on what I can do to change it or make it better?
"The true love Romeo and Juliet have impacts both their personalities and relationships with other characters. Much of the play involves the lovers struggle against the public and social society that oppose their love. Both Romeo and Juliet possess unique characteristics that help the marriage between the two stay strong and remain secret. Juliet matures greatly throughout the play considering her age of only 14. One of the characteristics that is shown numerous times is her courageousness. Juliet demonstrates courage when she takes the sleeping potion, proposes marriage to Romeo, and commits suicide in her attempt to be in a relationship with Romeo."
Do you think it's strong enough? If not suggestions on what I can do to change it or make it better?