is this an interesting first paragraph?

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i want it to be sudden.

I heard the screams first. Then the sound of laser beams being fired, kind of a high pitched drone. Then I smelt the blood, blood of humans and dogs. I grabbed my rifle and looked out the window, I saw androids shooting, and burning, in other words, destroying my town. I aimed, and fired at droid about 50 feet away from me. His head busted with electricity and sparks. The others started to shoot at me, so I crouched down. Suddenly, my door burst open and an android walked in.
“citizen, surrender your weapons and proceed calmly and peacefully” it said in a human like voice.
 
Well, I'm a girl and I don't like it if you want it to appeal to guys thats a great but to girls try again.
 
It has a lot of action so yes it is a good first paragraph is you want to be sudden.
 
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