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Killer530

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...please? Feedback? Have you ever wondered when or why the police were created? During the 1600’s and 1700’s African Americans were enslaved by the U.S., treating them literally like dogs. It wasn’t until the early 1700’s when slaves started revolting against slavery that the United States had to come up with a way to settle these riots slaves were holding. By the late 1700’s and early 1800’s slavery was being abolished in different parts of our Country, and a group of so called “law enforcers” were ones in charge of keeping these black people out of trouble, as well as other immigrants coming into the Country. As you can just imagine, African Americans weren’t treated like the average American. Instead, they were targeted more often than any other group. As time went by, the police became an international and worldwide organization exercising power to keep everything at peace. The epidemic that has long been ignored has come to such an extent nowadays that it must be dealt with. Our ignorance, and the feeling of being powerless compared to those who enforce the law has kept us from helping each other during critical moments in our lives. By exposing the different police brutalities and wrongful convictions that African Americans must endure at some point in their lives, I hope will capture the heart's of those who read, listen, and understand my concern for these people and my position. My position is not of one in which is trying to make one think that all police officers and courts are corrupt, but rather, I am trying to get the point across that there are many blacks who get convicted with no real proof of the crimes they have been accused of. Clearly, there are many other races being targeted as well, but my well established idea must be shed upon others to listen. From legitimate evidence showing the police or authorities in charge within certain convictions or circumstances taking matters into their own hands, one will see how out of control it can get.
 
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