It's this a cool ability for my antagonist? tips on making it better?

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monn

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My antagonist has the power to change the heart of any person that he touches. Meaning if he touches you he can instantly control your mind. How can I make this technique more awesome? should I put limitations on it?
 
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Jane

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with powers like that you can change the world. you can write so much when you have that ability

why don't you make him acidently touch the women he loves but he doesnt know if she actually loves him. you should make him wear leather gloves even in the summer.
 
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