Leave is in the air… a poem, care to comment?

[tJellzt]

Leave is in the air
By Jellz Fisher 072608

I wonder if Edwin Hubble’s
wife left him because
….she needed space.
Was he not focused
on their relationship
or in fact too far sighted?

George Ferris’ wife
Didn’t hang around long either.
She was heard to say
“The carnival is over,
it’s been a
rollercoaster journey,
I’m sure it will
turn out for the best”
We’ll see about that.

G and L Norman
made the cut too.
The wedge between
became too wide.
They joined
“Club Holy Matrimoney”
It’s an irony
that they would.
For them it was only
a good short game.
G and L Norman
made the cut too.
The wedge between
became too wide.
They joined
“Club Holy Matrimoney”
It’s an irony
that they would.
For them it was only
a good short game.

They went a fair way
to come to
agreeable terms
….as is par
for the course.
Now he has a
second shot at love.
We hope they can
hack it.

For the Hubbles,
life lived under the scope
of fame may be to blame
For the Ferrises and Normans
Maybe second time round
will be luckier.
sorry repeated the first stanza of the G & L Norman verse. not intended.

 

[ceiinwyn]

I really like the poem. I think it's extremely CREATIVE and ORIGINAL. Excellent.