i'm talking about macbeth's and lady macbeth's morals. we use the hook, link and thesis. help me out with this intro, is it right? what should i edit and improve it?
As a child, you were most likely taught what is right and what is wrong. Lady Macbeth's morals altered once she saw that Duncan reminded her of her father. It could have been possible that her father also reminded her of when she was a kid, the time where morals were taught to her. Although she still went on with the murder, her toughness deteriorated increasingly after Duncan was dead. Guilt ate at her until she committed suicide. On the other hand, Macbeth started out as the woman of the relationship. "Yet do I fear thy nature,/It is too full o' th' milk of human kindness/To catch the nearest way". Lady Macbeth explained how she was afraid that Macbeth would not kill Duncan because he was too human and kind to do it. She was wrong. Macbeth proved to be even more evil than her, ultimately by killing his best friend and an innocent family to stay on the throne. He ignored what his conscience told him to get what was not that important in life: money, power, authority and land. Together, they traded places without their knowledge, completing what the witches said, "Fair is foul and foul is fair," in terms of their morals.
As a child, you were most likely taught what is right and what is wrong. Lady Macbeth's morals altered once she saw that Duncan reminded her of her father. It could have been possible that her father also reminded her of when she was a kid, the time where morals were taught to her. Although she still went on with the murder, her toughness deteriorated increasingly after Duncan was dead. Guilt ate at her until she committed suicide. On the other hand, Macbeth started out as the woman of the relationship. "Yet do I fear thy nature,/It is too full o' th' milk of human kindness/To catch the nearest way". Lady Macbeth explained how she was afraid that Macbeth would not kill Duncan because he was too human and kind to do it. She was wrong. Macbeth proved to be even more evil than her, ultimately by killing his best friend and an innocent family to stay on the throne. He ignored what his conscience told him to get what was not that important in life: money, power, authority and land. Together, they traded places without their knowledge, completing what the witches said, "Fair is foul and foul is fair," in terms of their morals.