I'm writing a sci-fi book and I just wanted to hear some feed back on the ideas I have. Please don't steal this idea I've been working on it for a year and half now and 1. I will take you to court if you do and 2. I'm not going to reveal any plot twist, so your story won't fit the setting.
Setting:
The main story will take place in the year 302 P.A.E. (Post Apocalyptic Era). It's been 400 years since an experimental TDM bomb (Trans Dimensional Matter Bomb) was dropped on Europe turning it into a never ending lightning storm that covers all of Europe that is now known as The Void. After the TDM bomb was dropped all countries collapsed and total anarchy covered the planet, but civilization was restored a hundred years later. In this time humans have separated in to three breeds; Primes, Solars, and Sparks. Primes are just normal humans and make up about 70% of the human population. Solars are genetically altered humans, who had there genes conditioned to be mentally superior in every way as well as have a super immune system and natural athletic bodies. Sparks are mutated humans that came from The Void and have the ability to store and discharge energy at will. They are generally feared by everyone else but are still accepted in some societies. The differences between each breed is the source of many wars and there is much tension between the breeds. In this time humans now live in space on orbiting colonies or on the moon, and space flight is just as common as driving a car.
Technology:
In this time most of all energy and propulsion is provided by what is called TDM drives. The concept is that gravitons (the particle that causes gravity) don't exist in this dimension, and by pulling some into our dimension will cause an absorption affect that gathers particles, crushes them, and turns them into usable energy and matter. With these TDM drives any vehicle no longer needs to refuel. In war new mecha machines called Mobile Arms are used in every situation the stand about 10 meters tall and are piloted from the inside. Except the main character uses a battle exo-suit called a Valkyrie Suit. The suit is capable of giving the user great strength and can fly using a micro TDM drive and fold able wings that look like angel wings, making them angels of the battlefield, hence the name Valkyries.
Story:
The story follows the main character, a solar/spark mix named Zack Rhys after a terrible tragedy that happened five years ago. He was stuck in a depression until he meets someone and gets his life back together, but chaos soon follows after as an organization that hunts down his breed starts to take over Earth and the colonies and a ghost from the past returns as an enemy. Will Zack triumph over this evil or is it even the real evil in this world; and is he as alone as he thinks he is?
In conclusion, this story is still a work in progress and things may change in the final copy. Also be prepared for a trilogy and to rethink what a happy ending is (It's called a tragedy for a reason).
@Intelek
Don't worry I have an explanation for all those questions I just didn't want to go overboard with the details.
I doubt it's any more over the top then starwars, star trek, or even Avatar. The only difference being that this story is supposed to be more darker then any of those.
I guess my interest might have subconsciously influenced this story because, yeah I do watch anime and gundam is my favorite anime. HAHAHA (And no they are called mobile suits)
This graviton theory stems form research that I saw about scientist that were trying to find the cause of gravity and the search for the garviton particle. It was discovered that gravitational force is microscopic compared to strong nuclear force, weak nuclear force, and electromegnetic force. In the conclusion they found no signs of gravitons and no signs of gravity even existing in this dimension. The theory that I came up with was that the gravity we feel in this dimension is a bleeding affect caused by matter distorting th
Setting:
The main story will take place in the year 302 P.A.E. (Post Apocalyptic Era). It's been 400 years since an experimental TDM bomb (Trans Dimensional Matter Bomb) was dropped on Europe turning it into a never ending lightning storm that covers all of Europe that is now known as The Void. After the TDM bomb was dropped all countries collapsed and total anarchy covered the planet, but civilization was restored a hundred years later. In this time humans have separated in to three breeds; Primes, Solars, and Sparks. Primes are just normal humans and make up about 70% of the human population. Solars are genetically altered humans, who had there genes conditioned to be mentally superior in every way as well as have a super immune system and natural athletic bodies. Sparks are mutated humans that came from The Void and have the ability to store and discharge energy at will. They are generally feared by everyone else but are still accepted in some societies. The differences between each breed is the source of many wars and there is much tension between the breeds. In this time humans now live in space on orbiting colonies or on the moon, and space flight is just as common as driving a car.
Technology:
In this time most of all energy and propulsion is provided by what is called TDM drives. The concept is that gravitons (the particle that causes gravity) don't exist in this dimension, and by pulling some into our dimension will cause an absorption affect that gathers particles, crushes them, and turns them into usable energy and matter. With these TDM drives any vehicle no longer needs to refuel. In war new mecha machines called Mobile Arms are used in every situation the stand about 10 meters tall and are piloted from the inside. Except the main character uses a battle exo-suit called a Valkyrie Suit. The suit is capable of giving the user great strength and can fly using a micro TDM drive and fold able wings that look like angel wings, making them angels of the battlefield, hence the name Valkyries.
Story:
The story follows the main character, a solar/spark mix named Zack Rhys after a terrible tragedy that happened five years ago. He was stuck in a depression until he meets someone and gets his life back together, but chaos soon follows after as an organization that hunts down his breed starts to take over Earth and the colonies and a ghost from the past returns as an enemy. Will Zack triumph over this evil or is it even the real evil in this world; and is he as alone as he thinks he is?
In conclusion, this story is still a work in progress and things may change in the final copy. Also be prepared for a trilogy and to rethink what a happy ending is (It's called a tragedy for a reason).
@Intelek
Don't worry I have an explanation for all those questions I just didn't want to go overboard with the details.
I doubt it's any more over the top then starwars, star trek, or even Avatar. The only difference being that this story is supposed to be more darker then any of those.
I guess my interest might have subconsciously influenced this story because, yeah I do watch anime and gundam is my favorite anime. HAHAHA (And no they are called mobile suits)
This graviton theory stems form research that I saw about scientist that were trying to find the cause of gravity and the search for the garviton particle. It was discovered that gravitational force is microscopic compared to strong nuclear force, weak nuclear force, and electromegnetic force. In the conclusion they found no signs of gravitons and no signs of gravity even existing in this dimension. The theory that I came up with was that the gravity we feel in this dimension is a bleeding affect caused by matter distorting th