Need help with a start off introduction paragraph on an essay please help?

VictoriaJ

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This essay is based on should physical contact be banned from schools such as high fives, hand shakes and hugs. Any ideas please let me know as well as topics I can discuss in my essay.
 
Well you definitely need a grabber as your first sentence, which, hence the name, grabs the audience's attention.
 
A classic essay should have three parts - an intro (telling the reader what you're going to present), a body (presenting it) and a conclusion (telling the reader what you've presented). Normally, you can choose three things in the intro to expand on, giving each a paragraph in the body - a total of five paragraphs altogether in the essay.

You have three topics to discuss, but I'm not sure how much you can get out of them; is there really much you can say about high fives, hand shakes and hugs?

Of course, I may be totally wrong and you have plenty to say about them. Personally, I'd choose to select a different topic that I could expand on, but that's just me.
 
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