Can anyone please help me change my introduction paragraph into a conclusion paragraph?
I would highly appreciate it if anyone helps me.
Introduction Paragraph
I am suited into becoming a film-maker because of my vast knowledge in cinema, my dedication, and my ability to impact people through film-making. Throughout my life I’ve taken several cinema courses which have shaped my knowledge in film-making. I’ve also dedicated my time and effort towards film-making to learn and become better each day. I have the capacity to impact people who view my films. It is my knowledge in filmmaking, my devotion, and being capable of impacting the people that watch my films, which, therefore, makes me suited to become a film-maker.
I would highly appreciate it if anyone helps me.
Introduction Paragraph
I am suited into becoming a film-maker because of my vast knowledge in cinema, my dedication, and my ability to impact people through film-making. Throughout my life I’ve taken several cinema courses which have shaped my knowledge in film-making. I’ve also dedicated my time and effort towards film-making to learn and become better each day. I have the capacity to impact people who view my films. It is my knowledge in filmmaking, my devotion, and being capable of impacting the people that watch my films, which, therefore, makes me suited to become a film-maker.