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Okay, I know it describes her first, and I've never done this kind of beginning before, but yeah, please critique it THOROUGHLY. I don't mind.
Thanks!
Her honey blonde hair cascaded in loose ringlets down to her shoulders, caressing her skin. Blue eyes shone with amusement and the topaz necklace rimmed with gold pressed against her pale neck, hanging confidently on the silver chain. The white dress hung off her body, and she smiled into the mirror, a smile which would melt hearts.
Her lips pressed into a grim line, and she frowned.
"Bree, c'mon!" Her Mother's voice rang through the air, and she sighed heavily.
Inside that look of confidence which covered her face as she strode down the stairs, the butterflies in her stomach failed to go away.
A smile covered her Mother's face as she approached her, and Bree was engulfed in a warm hug and she stepped out of the old, stone house.
Thanks!
Her honey blonde hair cascaded in loose ringlets down to her shoulders, caressing her skin. Blue eyes shone with amusement and the topaz necklace rimmed with gold pressed against her pale neck, hanging confidently on the silver chain. The white dress hung off her body, and she smiled into the mirror, a smile which would melt hearts.
Her lips pressed into a grim line, and she frowned.
"Bree, c'mon!" Her Mother's voice rang through the air, and she sighed heavily.
Inside that look of confidence which covered her face as she strode down the stairs, the butterflies in her stomach failed to go away.
A smile covered her Mother's face as she approached her, and Bree was engulfed in a warm hug and she stepped out of the old, stone house.