Opinions of my poem please ?

Leia

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how close the hour
of my love lost
longing for your power
at my hearts cost
please hold my love
close to your mind
a whispers loud shove
from words so unkind
i overlook the pain
the sadness in my eyes
when all i have is you to gain
so plesae ignore my cries- leia
 
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