so basically I wrote my personal statement about a bike trip I took and I fell off the trail about 1.5 stories. Everything was crappy in life at that time so I just wanted to stay at the bottom of the forest part forever until I saw this beautiful flower that was there despite the obstacles of its environment since it was cold, no sunlight etc. Then, it gave me hope that everything in life was gonna be okay so I climbed back up.
My question is, I had a friends who read it, and
Do you think that the admission people would believe this?
And what can I do to make it sound less dramatic?
or should I even use this at all?
Thanks so much for your help.
My question is, I had a friends who read it, and
Do you think that the admission people would believe this?
And what can I do to make it sound less dramatic?
or should I even use this at all?
Thanks so much for your help.