PROLOGUE:
I’m an outcast.
That’s all what I have to say about myself, that I am a freak, a lone wolf and an fugitive in the judging eyes of general society and a teenager being bullied because of his heritage and habits.
This is what I had to say about myself two years ago, this was my identity two years ago and two years ago were one of the worse times of my bizarre yet pathetic life.
Well I guess I’ll start from the beginning, the first day of high school and the first day when I saw her, a Venus flytrap. Why do I say that? Because the Venus flytrap is an extraordinary plant, unique among others of its kind yet having some of the properties of a carnivore and hunter. First it lures the unsuspecting fly by its invigorating smell, invites it to its beautiful mouth and later clamps its mouth on the poor fly and digests it very slowly –making the fly’s last moments very painful. I suppose that’s what happened to me, I being the unintentional prey and her being the hunter, the carnivore and the trap.
So thus a story begins, of a cliché plot with the story having the same overused characters as the many thousands of stories being written down
Yes it is the same story but it is my own tale, a tale of the two worst years of my life, worse than the years I was called the ‘fart machine’ and even worse than the day I had the courage to dance in front of my relatives yet making a fool out of myself. Yes, there are many worse situations and things a person can encounter but for me it was extremely embarrassing but hey, they say it happens to everyone, right?
Any suggestions?
Is it interesting or plain boring?
Vocabulary? (my weak side)
Grammar and Punctuation? (My weak side)
I’m an outcast.
That’s all what I have to say about myself, that I am a freak, a lone wolf and an fugitive in the judging eyes of general society and a teenager being bullied because of his heritage and habits.
This is what I had to say about myself two years ago, this was my identity two years ago and two years ago were one of the worse times of my bizarre yet pathetic life.
Well I guess I’ll start from the beginning, the first day of high school and the first day when I saw her, a Venus flytrap. Why do I say that? Because the Venus flytrap is an extraordinary plant, unique among others of its kind yet having some of the properties of a carnivore and hunter. First it lures the unsuspecting fly by its invigorating smell, invites it to its beautiful mouth and later clamps its mouth on the poor fly and digests it very slowly –making the fly’s last moments very painful. I suppose that’s what happened to me, I being the unintentional prey and her being the hunter, the carnivore and the trap.
So thus a story begins, of a cliché plot with the story having the same overused characters as the many thousands of stories being written down
Yes it is the same story but it is my own tale, a tale of the two worst years of my life, worse than the years I was called the ‘fart machine’ and even worse than the day I had the courage to dance in front of my relatives yet making a fool out of myself. Yes, there are many worse situations and things a person can encounter but for me it was extremely embarrassing but hey, they say it happens to everyone, right?
Any suggestions?
Is it interesting or plain boring?
Vocabulary? (my weak side)
Grammar and Punctuation? (My weak side)