AveryljoLuis
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A story I've been working on in real for quiet some time now. Was considering trying to send it to a few agents but decided against it, as I have another one I think could be better than this one. Anyways here's just the short opening, if you guys like I'll post the next few chapters or just let the thread die if you don't
Breath in. Breath out. Breath in. Breath out. Most people can do it, no problem. However most people don't have lies and threats pushing down their throats. Most people don't have humility and stress pumping through their blood. But than again, most people don't commit suicide.
I was average. That is until reality hit. No. Not reality. Hell. Hell hit like a brick in the face, leaving open scars for the world to see, so no one would ever forget.
To Save you from any more confusion, I'll just tell you what happened. I'll tell you how I got to this horrible place. I'll tell you how I decided to commit suicide.
Thanks
Breath in. Breath out. Breath in. Breath out. Most people can do it, no problem. However most people don't have lies and threats pushing down their throats. Most people don't have humility and stress pumping through their blood. But than again, most people don't commit suicide.
I was average. That is until reality hit. No. Not reality. Hell. Hell hit like a brick in the face, leaving open scars for the world to see, so no one would ever forget.
To Save you from any more confusion, I'll just tell you what happened. I'll tell you how I got to this horrible place. I'll tell you how I decided to commit suicide.
Thanks