POEM-Anyone who's Mum committed suicide when they were young?

AmiieeRawrr

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I wrote this little poem thingy, tell me what do you think of it?

Has anyone lost their Mum to suicide at a young age? Or maybe she left and went away?
I'd rather not explain what I know to have written something quite like this
But if you have, plz I'd love to hear your story


'Mummy, tell me. Why do you cry?'. 'Oh honey, it's because this is all just too hard'. 'I'm sorry Mummy. What can I do?'. 'Nothing darling, this is something I just can't pull through'. 'I can wash the dishes, dry and put them away, I'll even dress myself today. I'll make my own bed, and eat all my food. I can tell you a story and tuck you in too'. 'No, You don't need to anything, But promise me you'll remember, That I love you, And never will stop doing so, Even when I am gone'. 'Okay Mummy, but where are you going?' 'Just someplace else where I can be alone'. 'Mummy, I'll miss you'. 'I'll miss you too my love, please never forget I love you, you are my girl'. 'I love you Mummy, please don’t go'...
 
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