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For My Love’s Sake

While attempting to know
My soul – I met yours.
Four eyes met; and two souls,
Love came, and we were one.
For thy love’s sake,
I gave up my thirst for freedom.
It was an eternal bondage;
To which my heart gave in at last.

Today those sleepless nights stand
As memories of those forlorn promises.
Remember, how you left me in this purple darkness?
Murdering my hopes of existence.
Yet I remember thee,
For my love’s sake ,which was true.


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http://www.infibeam.com/Books/melancholic-delight-tista-ray/9789382303015.html?utm_term=Melancholic+Delight_1_4

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