I will revise everything later, but this is what I just wrote, in class again.
Correct me on anything that needs it.
Thanks!
"Come with me, and I'll show you to your first class." I follow silently behind him, feeling awhwark without making conversation. The hall was long and narrow, and it seems to be taking forever to get there. I hear another bell go off, but louder this time. My own principle has me late. When we finally arrive at my class, I read the door. 'English III.' I don't think that is too bad. He opens the door, and suddenly everyones' eyes are on me. I could feel my face get very warm, which was kind of embarassing. I look up at my principle who is smiling at me, and I've decided that it's time to speak up. "Uhm...My name is Aria Grace...and I just transferred from my old school back in Georgia." All I want right now is to sit down. The whole room is continuously looking at me, and I can feel the anticipation fluttering around. At last, I hear another voice despite my own. "I am Mrs. Harrison. We are very excited to have you in this class. Please, take a seat." I silently walked to the back of the class, and sat as far away from the teacher as possible. The eyes were finally destracted from me, and I feel so much better. I hear a loud whisper to my left. I look over to see this guy pointing at me, which made me turn away swiftly. I have to deal with this...
Class is almost over.
Criticism is greatly welcomed!
It needs a lot of work.
Correct me on anything that needs it.
Thanks!"Come with me, and I'll show you to your first class." I follow silently behind him, feeling awhwark without making conversation. The hall was long and narrow, and it seems to be taking forever to get there. I hear another bell go off, but louder this time. My own principle has me late. When we finally arrive at my class, I read the door. 'English III.' I don't think that is too bad. He opens the door, and suddenly everyones' eyes are on me. I could feel my face get very warm, which was kind of embarassing. I look up at my principle who is smiling at me, and I've decided that it's time to speak up. "Uhm...My name is Aria Grace...and I just transferred from my old school back in Georgia." All I want right now is to sit down. The whole room is continuously looking at me, and I can feel the anticipation fluttering around. At last, I hear another voice despite my own. "I am Mrs. Harrison. We are very excited to have you in this class. Please, take a seat." I silently walked to the back of the class, and sat as far away from the teacher as possible. The eyes were finally destracted from me, and I feel so much better. I hear a loud whisper to my left. I look over to see this guy pointing at me, which made me turn away swiftly. I have to deal with this...
Class is almost over.
Criticism is greatly welcomed!
It needs a lot of work.