This is a poem I wrote when I was 16, is it lame lol?

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My Finger Print

My Finger print is unique. I love my finger print. Everything I touch leaves my whole life. I leave my memories and thoughts behind with my fingerprint. Though you can’t see my finger print, its there. We all have our own thoughts and memories that our own fingerprints will mark. My fingerprint is like the great world winds that soar across the world. Every time I touch reality I leave my own markings behind for others to see how I live. We may have some similar thoughts, but we don’t have the same fingerprints. I hope you all love your fingerprints as much as I love mine.
Yeah I was going through alot of tough changes at the time so it was very deep.
 
There's a great idea behind it. Tis a bit lame-ish though. I think you should edge it up a bit
 
The meaning is kind of ok but what you wrote is kind of lame i don't think you can sent the message of the the poem that well the way you wrote it.
 
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