Well.. i just had a national exam which would concern my future.
The composition topic was ''mistakes''
Well.. i wrote something like this ( Summarized )
1. John ( the main character ) saw the news about this traveler who had lots of cash on hand , no pass port and no memory due to car accident.
2. He acted as if he knew the man and fabricated/ lie to the man about his identity and aim of coming to this country.
3. He took the money without thinking if the man needed the money for a family member operation or such.
4. At last, he knew that it was his mistake and had all the flash backs about all the mistakes he had done.
5. Before he went down, he mumbled to himself, : What mistakes have I done......... ''
Which means he regretted it.
Please tell me weather I could pass or not, and by the way, its my 'N' level examination, and is marked by Cambridge markers.
The composition topic was ''mistakes''
Well.. i wrote something like this ( Summarized )
1. John ( the main character ) saw the news about this traveler who had lots of cash on hand , no pass port and no memory due to car accident.
2. He acted as if he knew the man and fabricated/ lie to the man about his identity and aim of coming to this country.
3. He took the money without thinking if the man needed the money for a family member operation or such.
4. At last, he knew that it was his mistake and had all the flash backs about all the mistakes he had done.
5. Before he went down, he mumbled to himself, : What mistakes have I done......... ''
Which means he regretted it.
Please tell me weather I could pass or not, and by the way, its my 'N' level examination, and is marked by Cambridge markers.