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Thoughts on a Love poem?
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<blockquote data-quote="Musikal Sole" data-source="post: 406298"><p>Any thoughts or suggestions???</p><p></p><p>I LET MY GUARD DOWN</p><p>I let my guard down </p><p>for the very </p><p>first time. </p><p>I'll let you see the real me </p><p>through these lines </p><p>I write. </p><p></p><p>So many times </p><p>the deceit </p><p>has caused me </p><p>to retreat </p><p>back behind </p><p>this concrete </p><p>wall </p><p>that protects my heart but</p><p>it’s time I let go </p><p>and watch this wall </p><p>fall</p><p></p><p>Constantly, </p><p>the annihilation of me, </p><p>my feelings,</p><p>violation of what we </p><p>vowed in the beginning </p><p>has overcome me...</p><p></p><p>I built this armor, </p><p>but I can live this way no longer. </p><p>I trace the teardrop stains </p><p>lain on my pillow </p><p>hoping maybe one day </p><p>they will realize how they hurt me...</p><p></p><p>But I am letting go of those past memories </p><p>and turning over a new leaf. </p><p>fear is near </p><p>doubt is about </p><p>but I’m going to trust again</p><p>in hopes it works out...</p><p></p><p>Here I am unshielded, </p><p>my feelings yielded…to you…</p><p></p><p>Baby…I let my guard down for us two.</p><p>© January 2007</p><p></p><p>Thanks for reading!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Musikal Sole, post: 406298"] Any thoughts or suggestions??? I LET MY GUARD DOWN I let my guard down for the very first time. I'll let you see the real me through these lines I write. So many times the deceit has caused me to retreat back behind this concrete wall that protects my heart but it’s time I let go and watch this wall fall Constantly, the annihilation of me, my feelings, violation of what we vowed in the beginning has overcome me... I built this armor, but I can live this way no longer. I trace the teardrop stains lain on my pillow hoping maybe one day they will realize how they hurt me... But I am letting go of those past memories and turning over a new leaf. fear is near doubt is about but I’m going to trust again in hopes it works out... Here I am unshielded, my feelings yielded…to you… Baby…I let my guard down for us two. © January 2007 Thanks for reading! [/QUOTE]
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