What Do You Think About The Song I Wrote?

Alexh

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I tryed to use more complicated words
sorry if it sounds a little sexual i didn't think it would come out that way:P
but tell me what you think

U And I Tonight

verse 1:
It wasn’t raining yet
but it was a little misty
getting misty on that warm December night
and my hart was pounding
I here your voice resounding
and I knew I had to turn away
but I just had to see your face

hook 1:
I feel I lie
as you casually moved in the room
and I was twisted in the web of my desire
my apprehensions blew away I only wanted you
to taste me pain just as you kissed me in the dark

course:
every time I feel the need
I'd envision you caressing me
let go back in time
to the rumors spreading of you and I
on the roof top valley tonight

verse 2:
these foolish games have got me jaded
started feeling liberated
and surrendered as you put me in your arms
I was so cot up in the moment
just couldn’t bare to let you go again
so I thought after this evening
you would begin to start listing
listen to my lonely hart

hook 2:
and then you pressed your lips to mine
I feeling my selfish thoughts I had for a long long time
and for a wile I felt your love caving in on me
just couldn't believe that you where standing here with me

course:
every time I feel the need
I'd envision you caressing me
let go back in time
to the rumors spreading of you and I
on the roof top valley tonight

course:
every time I feel the need
I'd envision you caressing me
let go back in time
to the rumors spreading of you and i
on the roof top valley tonight

bridge:
what ever you want all surrender
just as long as you stay forever
one touch one dream
so very suddenly as you where kissing me

course:
every time I feel the need
I'd envision you caressing me
let go back in time
to the rumors spreading of you and i
on the roof top valley tonight

course:
every time I feel the need
I'd envision you caressing me
let go back in time
to the rumors spreading of you and i
on the roof top valley tonight
lol sorry i posted it in the wrong secshon but you can still have your point of view on it:P
 
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