I have this idea, I've already written a rough draft and I didn't like it and I was wondering if you liked my idea...
It's about a girl marauder named Nicholas Fage. She was best friends with James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter, and pretty good friends with Severus (considering she's saved his life more then once and he's saved hers). She got along really well with Lily, also. Her parents are always fighting, and she has a little brother named Kludge, who was always shy (you would be too if you were named Kludge) who's four years younger then her.
It's a series, and it jumps around quite a bit because I like stories that do that,
Unmentioned: Year five, first book
Unpopular: Year one, second book
Unliked: Year Two, third book
Untrusted: Year six, fourth book
Unrecognized: Year three, fifth book
Unhappy: Year four, sixth book
Unalive: Year seven, seventh book
I'm going to give you the basic layout of Unmentioned, the first book.
Bandit (Nick), Padfoot, Mooney, Wormtail, and Prongs start out the year by almost getting themselves killed. Padfoot bets Bandit that she isn't faster then him, so they race, leaving Prongs, Mooney, and Wormtail at the Whomping Willow (It's a full moon). Mooney almost kills James by throwing him into the Whomping Willow, causing him to change back into a human. Kludge comes wandering out, wondering where his sister went and comes to see Bandit and Padfoot attacking Mooney. They solve this by stuffing him into the hole, all of them (including Kludge) almost dead.
Severus, much later in the year, goes to attack Bandit's parents for killing his little brother (who was never mentioned in the series). Her mom then uses a Unforgivable spell and Bandit takes the blame and is sent to Azkaban.
Bandit is set free, proven unguilty and the marauders cause MUCH more trouble later on which I'll post later.
What'd you think?
It's about a girl marauder named Nicholas Fage. She was best friends with James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter, and pretty good friends with Severus (considering she's saved his life more then once and he's saved hers). She got along really well with Lily, also. Her parents are always fighting, and she has a little brother named Kludge, who was always shy (you would be too if you were named Kludge) who's four years younger then her.
It's a series, and it jumps around quite a bit because I like stories that do that,
Unmentioned: Year five, first book
Unpopular: Year one, second book
Unliked: Year Two, third book
Untrusted: Year six, fourth book
Unrecognized: Year three, fifth book
Unhappy: Year four, sixth book
Unalive: Year seven, seventh book
I'm going to give you the basic layout of Unmentioned, the first book.
Bandit (Nick), Padfoot, Mooney, Wormtail, and Prongs start out the year by almost getting themselves killed. Padfoot bets Bandit that she isn't faster then him, so they race, leaving Prongs, Mooney, and Wormtail at the Whomping Willow (It's a full moon). Mooney almost kills James by throwing him into the Whomping Willow, causing him to change back into a human. Kludge comes wandering out, wondering where his sister went and comes to see Bandit and Padfoot attacking Mooney. They solve this by stuffing him into the hole, all of them (including Kludge) almost dead.
Severus, much later in the year, goes to attack Bandit's parents for killing his little brother (who was never mentioned in the series). Her mom then uses a Unforgivable spell and Bandit takes the blame and is sent to Azkaban.
Bandit is set free, proven unguilty and the marauders cause MUCH more trouble later on which I'll post later.
What'd you think?