What do you think of my rap I wrote (no homos)?

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muchamucha

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What do you think about the rap I wrote?
It`s called "you know it" it`s a rap song with a generic rap beat

this is crazy you know it you know it
over rated you know it you know it
take it off you know it you know it
got sexy abs you know it you know it
junk in the trunk you know it you know
grab my stick and shove it in drive you know it you know it
cuz theres a party im gunna be at with many girls I plan on penitrating
I want my stick to be grabbed and rubbed cuz that make the stick happy
you know it you know it Biatches


BTW my rapper name is lil amore so holla at me chikas
and ya i`m a guy
 
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CarolIne1

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misogynistic, offensive and brutal. This is not what rap is meant to be - or rather this is why rap has a bad name in the overall mindset of American culture. Try again, and remove the subject of sex, money or being tough and scary. Can you do that?
 
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CarolIne2

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misogynistic, offensive and brutal. This is not what rap is meant to be - or rather this is why rap has a bad name in the overall mindset of American culture. Try again, and remove the subject of sex, money or being tough and scary. Can you do that?
 
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