What do you think of my version Jingle Bells?lol?

[WinnieFoo]

Hullo Please tell me what you think,I just wrote it

Dashin' through my mind
With a notebook in my hand
Thinkin' what to write
About a damn poem
I open my brains door
Is what I didn't expect
What fun is in seeing my brain fallin' out my head

Oh!

Coming up,Coming up
With a damn poem
Oh What fun it is to ride in my crazy brain(Oh!)

Coming up,Coming up
With a damn poem
Oh What fun it is to ride in my crazy brain(Oh!)

Dashin' through my head
Tryin' to find Exit
But the damn door froze
Can't open that gate
I ring the bells on the door
But no one answered me
Oh,I guess I'm locked in here,...for the rest of my life(Aye!)

Oh!

Damn poems,damn poems
driving my brain nuts
Oh what fun it is to blame the cold,
while locked in here!

Oh!

Damn poems,damn poems
driving my brain nuts
Oh what fun it is to blame the cold,
while locked in here!

(Music goes on)

Coming up,Coming up
With a damn poem
Oh What fun it is to ride in my lazy brain

Oh!

Damn poems,damn poems
driving my brain nuts
Oh what fun it is to blame the cold,
while locked in here!

~End~

Soooo,what do you think?
Thanks!
-Winnie Foo

 

[EllyColling]

aha, it's good :') x