well i wrote this about my Gf. please feel free to tell me how i could make it better also, and honest opinions on it also please 
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song title: Her.
She’s everything to me
She’s my whole world
Makes me feel like no one else does
Feels as if my hearts been twirled
Never met a girl so caring
Wouldn’t have thought she’d be the one
But no one can really tell
Until their feelings have begun
Coz all i need is her
To hold on to
At the end of the day
No one else would do
She makes me feel so warm
Way down deep inside
Im loving this feeling
There is no downside
I never knew someone could do it for real
Make my life brighter
But honestly from the bottom of my heart
I know i love her
She is so beautiful
The way i look into her eyes
They’re so amazing
Coz they got me mesmerised
Every little thing about her
Including that gorgeous smile
Just looking at that
Makes it more than worth my while
She loves me, i love her
We’ll be together forever!
Coz all i need is her
To hold on to
At the end of the day
No one else would do
She makes me feel so warm
Way down deep inside
Im loving this feeling
There is no downside
I never knew someone could do it for real
Make my life brighter
But honestly from the bottom of my heart
I know i love her
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what do you think? :]
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song title: Her.
She’s everything to me
She’s my whole world
Makes me feel like no one else does
Feels as if my hearts been twirled
Never met a girl so caring
Wouldn’t have thought she’d be the one
But no one can really tell
Until their feelings have begun
Coz all i need is her
To hold on to
At the end of the day
No one else would do
She makes me feel so warm
Way down deep inside
Im loving this feeling
There is no downside
I never knew someone could do it for real
Make my life brighter
But honestly from the bottom of my heart
I know i love her
She is so beautiful
The way i look into her eyes
They’re so amazing
Coz they got me mesmerised
Every little thing about her
Including that gorgeous smile
Just looking at that
Makes it more than worth my while
She loves me, i love her
We’ll be together forever!
Coz all i need is her
To hold on to
At the end of the day
No one else would do
She makes me feel so warm
Way down deep inside
Im loving this feeling
There is no downside
I never knew someone could do it for real
Make my life brighter
But honestly from the bottom of my heart
I know i love her
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what do you think? :]