twobabiesonthewaya
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- Sep 6, 2010
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Bang! I was down. I don’t know what’s happened, all I know is that I’ve been shot. I don’t know where I am, I only know I’m lying on the ground somewhere in countryside. I’m very cold and I think I’m alone.
I can hear very loud footsteps coming towards me, I don’t know who or what it is; I think it’s the guy who shot me, considering it is a guy. I’m lying down in the middle of the countryside; I don’t think I’m going to be found.
I can hear people, crowding around me a lot of people. I can hear them speaking
‘Shall we call and ambulance’ said one guy. ‘I’ve got a cell phone, but I don’t think I’ve got any signal!’
‘I’ve got a phone with signal!’ shouted a woman ‘I’ll phone them straight away.’
any improvements she could make-
this is all she had done, but she's going to carry on tomorrow.
I can hear very loud footsteps coming towards me, I don’t know who or what it is; I think it’s the guy who shot me, considering it is a guy. I’m lying down in the middle of the countryside; I don’t think I’m going to be found.
I can hear people, crowding around me a lot of people. I can hear them speaking
‘Shall we call and ambulance’ said one guy. ‘I’ve got a cell phone, but I don’t think I’ve got any signal!’
‘I’ve got a phone with signal!’ shouted a woman ‘I’ll phone them straight away.’
any improvements she could make-
this is all she had done, but she's going to carry on tomorrow.