What do you think of this??? My original piece....=D?

[RieTorimaru]

Hey guys pls gimme comments..... Do not copy...

Someday(Original Song)

I’m walking away
Walking away
Don’t care what you say

I ain’t gonna see you no more
Cause I’m running away
From this horrible place

Not gonna talk to you anymore
Cause I’m not just another pretty face
From the old open place

You take me for granted
For who I am
You make me feel
Like I’m a worthless piece of trash

I don’t care what you say
I’m just gonna forget you anyway
Baby I don’t care what you say now
I’m gonna let you go someday

Walking down the pavement
Things are getting stranger now
There ain’t nothing left to say

And here I am right now
Just standing all alone right here
With nowhere else
Left to stray

You take me for granted
For who I am
You make me feel
Like I’m a worthless piece of trash


Cause I don’t care what you say
I’m gonna forget you someday
I don’t care what you say now
Cause I’m gonna let you go someday

It doesn’t matter whether you’re forever blue
But hey
I was told to
Don’t take the bad road down
Don’t go down the sad streets
Just turn around(X2)

I don’t care what you say
I’m just gonna forget you anyway
Baby I don’t care what you say now
I’m gonna let you go someday
I’m gonna change this world
One minute at a time
Don’t care what you say
I’m gonna let you go someday

I consider it uncompleted....