what do you think of this plot for my story please? Am I stealing any ideas from

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Atika

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anyone? Here's the plot

There's this guy called Jaden. He's a handsome Demon and is getting the Demon Fire. The Demon Fire is a curse that takes over a demon's body and turns them merciless and evil. Then he meets Lily-Rose a human girl. Jaden starts to feel an attraction towads her that he can't understand. As well as that Jaden's obnoxious brother Noah had arrived in town and is stirring up trouble. Jaden has to defeat his brother and control his irresistable love for Lily-Rose
Give me some feedback please
 
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Sophie

Member
yes. you are stealing the plot from the Vampire Diaries..

Stephan comes to town and falls in love with a human girl Elena... Damon, Stephens brother, then comes to town to visit and causes trouble..
 
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Lights

New member
Sounds fine to me ^.^
But also why would u ask if you were stealing people's ideas? If you didn't get it from anyone then you wouldn't be stealing it.
 
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JeCe

Member
plot sounds good, the only thing i can see is that Jaden is the name of one of the people in the star wars books. But there are only so many names out there, and the people who read the star wars books probably wont read yours since its a different genre, so i think you're fine.
 
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