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This is the opening scene to my story, please comment on it, and point out any mistakes. Also does it make you want to read more? Why, or why not. Thanks BB :)

The light of the full moon was shining down on her. Everywhere around her people were in different states of undress, preparing for the change that was going to happen. Next month it would be her turn. She could feel her heart beat with excitement. Squirming on branch, she let her eyes wander over her pack-mates. She could feel her beasts need to run with the pack, her skin tingled from the energy building up inside her. Her hands ran over her arms trying to sooth the energy that was pricking her skin. A shout from the pack leader called the pack to order, she could see Pierre, his arms and legs bending with his transformation, and the silvery hair of his fur, slowly covering his skin. It was time. As their leader changed, so to did the rest. Their once human bodies, bending and twisting with the change, and their fur slowly covering skin.

As the last of the pack finished their change, Gabbi, her hungry eyes, never straying from her packmates, felt the beast inside her howl, desperate to join the pack, that was preparing for their run. As much as she and her beast longed to join them, she knew if was far too dangerous to run with the pack while in her human form. Once their beasts took over, especially during a hunt, they acted just as their nature called for them to do.
 
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