I hope it makes since in all the lines, i mean transitioning from one line to another and the theme is good and the over all peom? Please and Thanx. Title ideas NEEDED?
I look to my left, I look to my right
Knowing all my dreams are still out of sight
I want to live I want to be free
But how, if I still can’t see
When I realize
It is all a disguise
I am free
So I let myself see
All the wonder ahead
All my dreams stuck in that bed
I reach out and grasp
The heart shaped clasp
I open it wide
Ready for the ride
That life may take me on
Experiencing the break of dawn
I would hope to love
All life including the dove
I just have to stop
Let myself drop
Close my eyes and simply accept
That the future is blind but not inept
I look to my left, I look to my right
Knowing all my dreams are still out of sight
I want to live I want to be free
But how, if I still can’t see
When I realize
It is all a disguise
I am free
So I let myself see
All the wonder ahead
All my dreams stuck in that bed
I reach out and grasp
The heart shaped clasp
I open it wide
Ready for the ride
That life may take me on
Experiencing the break of dawn
I would hope to love
All life including the dove
I just have to stop
Let myself drop
Close my eyes and simply accept
That the future is blind but not inept