When writing, how can I show instead of tell?

Torrie

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I've been writing for four years and never have I completed any of my work. Either due to my lack of correct grammar (which is now fixed) or I started a new one because I felt that the previous one was meaningless yet it wasn't but I thought that way anyway. But my question is how can I show when writing instead of telling. I did happen to hear that avoiding adverbs will help but I still continuously do it.

I would show you my latest piece, -- which I feel very confident in and will not trash it -- but unfortunately it's written on my iPhone (yes, I write stories on my iPhone)

What do you suggest?
 
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