Which Character Appearance And Description Do You Prefer?

[m_nicole]

I know appearances don't matter all that much, but with this character (and what he is) it sort of does. They're not all that different, but I'd like your opinions on which one you prefer.

One:
His hazel hair sweeps to the side, covering his forehead. Taai has a strong jawline and sharp cheekbones that surround a button nose. He has small eyes that are coloured a deep blue. His thin lips usually stay in a strict line, but when he does smile, dimples dint his cheeks. Taai's ears are also slightly pointed. He always seems brooding and mysterious, like he's keeping a secret that's killing him.

Two:
Taai normally curves his hair upwards, in a messy kind of way. Taai has a strong jawline and sharp cheekbones that surround a up-tilt nose. He has wide eyes that are coloured a drastically pale blue, that is almost translucent. Taai's ears are also slightly pointed. His plump lips are normally arched in a devious grin, and dimples dent his cheeks. Taai is an extremely playful person and he talks way too much. But all of this covers up how he really feels, and the secret that he's dying to tell Narissa.

Is one a bit cliche? Anyway, let me know what you think. I appreciate the help, really. Thanks in advance.

~Nicole.xx

 

[STACEYB]

Hmm. I think the first one is more original, at least in his looks. And i always like the tortured soul kinda guys. The ones your not sure are good or bad. My favorite haha. Although i think with the small eyes and thin lips makes him seem a bit scrawny.

But yea i deffinately like the first one better. Deep blue eyes are much better than light and dimples are the best. (Although i dont think we need to know that his ears are slightly pointed... just makes me think he is an elf)