bittersweetrosee
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Okay so usually ideas for stories would pour out of me, now I can't write a decent piece.. please tell me what you think this is just trying to get me back into writing.
"Trees thrashed violently back and forth, the wind kept picking up and rain poured down on Sara while lightning lit up the sky. She has busies everywhere, and a deep cut on her arm that kept bleeding. She was 50 miles out for town with no cellphone, she had only been walking for twenty minutes but was so exhusted.
"Sara, sara are you there?" A mans voice called from the distance. Seeing this has her one opportunity to be saved she shouted back, "I'm here! I'm here! Please help." Soon the mans shadow appeared and she called out again, "Did you bring others? Where is momma and pa?"silence filled the air,
"Oh you will get to see them," he laughed." In body bags!" Sara's face twisted and she began to cryn realizing it was the man who had taken her.
"You monster! Leave my family alone!"
"Now now beautiful, everythings going to be alright," he said chuckling. In a moment of panic she ran. Her breathing was hard and her whole body ached but she pushed on.
"Come back here! Bitch come back!" The mystery guy ran and lunged on top of her, knocking her out. Her limp body lay in a puddle made by the storm.
"Shit!" He whispered under his breath. He began to drag her throw the mud figuring it was easier then carrying her through the down pour.
"Trees thrashed violently back and forth, the wind kept picking up and rain poured down on Sara while lightning lit up the sky. She has busies everywhere, and a deep cut on her arm that kept bleeding. She was 50 miles out for town with no cellphone, she had only been walking for twenty minutes but was so exhusted.
"Sara, sara are you there?" A mans voice called from the distance. Seeing this has her one opportunity to be saved she shouted back, "I'm here! I'm here! Please help." Soon the mans shadow appeared and she called out again, "Did you bring others? Where is momma and pa?"silence filled the air,
"Oh you will get to see them," he laughed." In body bags!" Sara's face twisted and she began to cryn realizing it was the man who had taken her.
"You monster! Leave my family alone!"
"Now now beautiful, everythings going to be alright," he said chuckling. In a moment of panic she ran. Her breathing was hard and her whole body ached but she pushed on.
"Come back here! Bitch come back!" The mystery guy ran and lunged on top of her, knocking her out. Her limp body lay in a puddle made by the storm.
"Shit!" He whispered under his breath. He began to drag her throw the mud figuring it was easier then carrying her through the down pour.