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    Social anxiety - My first day at work. I need to vent, feedback?

    My first day. Hot, sweaty and mentally exhausted. I’m not particularly in the mood for writing anything at the moment but feel the need to get something down while emotions are fresh. Today was the first day of my new job, and I found it to be extremely stressful. I should have seen it coming...
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    Im posting this again so I can get more feedback from different people, i did

    edit so thanks first timers!!? Here it is...... (All feedback is welcome negative or positive) I gritted my teeth and closed my eyes. Surprisingly with all of the mayhem around me, the scorching heat of a open flame on my bare arm, my body crushed under a mountain of rubble, and my last grain...
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    Site Feedback

    The following message was sent to you via the IhAv.NET Contact Us form by Joshua Rivera. -------------------------------- SEO and Link Building Services (google Top 10 Guaranty) Hi Website Administrator, We are provide SEO and Link Building Services at very normal cost with google top...
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    Have a listen, i want some feedback on my music !! i wanna send it to record

    Unimpressive.
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    Have a listen, i want some feedback on my music !! i wanna send it to record

    companys so please have a listen? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sjJo72alF4g this is a song i wrote and recorded at home i want to get a record deal, and im trying to see if its what the public consider good no nasty comments, construcive critism please, would you buy it if it was released...
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    Have a listen, i want some feedback on my music !! i wanna send it to record

    Personally I like it. It's really soft and kind of relaxing in a way? I mean, yes some tweaks and some improvements could be made, but I think you have potential :)
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    Site Feedback

    The following message was sent to you via the IhAv.NET Contact Us form by upset. -------------------------------- http://www.ihav.net/vb/1740692-post1.html please remove defamatory illegal -------------------------------- Referring Page: From Mail: [email protected] IP...
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    To be Heard-a Poem by me. I would love feedback and a thought on if you think I...

    ...could get published? Title: To Be Heard..... There's a voice..in the absence of a silent quickness..Its asking with a hope.. Lit like a matched burned. Soon that tiny little thing will be that of a flicker blown.. Through a ghosts shadow, its a pray unsaid. A voice unanswered and guess what...
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    Sci-fi, need feedback - what do you think? Would you keep reading?

    I'm editing this chapter and I'm working on the tension. Tell me if you'd keep reading and if not then tell me why. Just tell me what you think about it. Thanks! Ronin heard the beeping of the keypad outside her locked room. The nurse would be entering and she would be ready to scream and fight...
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    Sci-fi, need feedback - what do you think? Would you keep reading?

    I'm editing this chapter and I'm working on the tension. Tell me if you'd keep reading and if not then tell me why. Just tell me what you think about it. Thanks! Ronin heard the beeping of the keypad outside her locked room. The nurse would be entering and she would be ready to scream and fight...
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    My baby was born at 23 weeks....any feedback on PDA?

    My son was born last Monday at 23 weeks, he was obviously having complications with his lungs due to the fact that they weren't fully matured yet, and was put on a vent to help him breathe. My son has been stable and has been improving. Today though, I called the NICU to check on him and I was...
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    Made some more greeting cards...just looking for some feedback?

    I made some of these hand drawn cards a while back which seemed to get a good response http://www.flickr.com/photos/35192090@N0… so anyway I made some more, look see http://www.flickr.com/photos/35192090@N0… let me know what you think, which ones work, which don't. Oh and please let me know if...
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    I need Feedback Please on my short story?

    Drip, Drip, Drip The Red Liquid fell to the white carpet from My Wrist. I then heard a loud Bang on My Door; I jumped when I heard it. “Open This Door Now” The Voice Bellowed From the other Side of the door, The Voice Was My Step Father. “N.NO” I screamed slightly stuttering it “Bitch Open This...
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    What is a good website to write stories, post them up and get feedback?

    Like a really well known website, or a popular one at least.
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    Please read and give me some feedback on the beginning of my story?

    http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2798138/1/Adele Please tell me what you think. Also, 1. Do you think the prologue works? (It wasn't originally written as the prologue, I just kind of made it into that on a whim) 2. How would you think it needs to be improved so that it feels more like chapters of...
  16. J

    How do you turn off Haptic Feedback on a Motorola Blur?

    I have a new Blur and the Haptic Feedback is driving me crazy, somebody please help thank you :)
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    divx avi Vs. h.264 avi conversion comparion. looking for feedback.?

    please take a look at this image and give me your feedback. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1292804/online%20pics/codec%20comparison.png If you disagree with my conclusion, please say why and possibly give some advice on getting better results. I'm looking for answers from experienced media freaks...
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    divx avi Vs. h.264 avi conversion comparion. looking for feedback.?

    please take a look at this image and give me your feedback. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1292804/online%20pics/codec%20comparison.png If you disagree with my conclusion, please say why and possibly give some advice on getting better results. I'm looking for answers from experienced media freaks...
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    Has anyone gotten good feedback from Nissan regarding replacing the 04 or 05...

    ...Nissan Maxima Transmission? So I'm sure Nissan is in denial but 04-05 Nissan Maximas have bad trannys I think consumers should know this? I'm in the process of getting mine fixed and I feel that I'm going to have to suck it up and pay the 2600 bucks but before I do I wanna know if anyones...
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    Has anyone gotten good feedback from Nissan regarding replacing the 04 or 05...

    ...Nissan Maxima Transmission? So I'm sure Nissan is in denial but 04-05 Nissan Maximas have bad trannys I think consumers should know this? I'm in the process of getting mine fixed and I feel that I'm going to have to suck it up and pay the 2600 bucks but before I do I wanna know if anyones...
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