I am really having troubles with this. Like what comes first? would I put my thesis sentence as like my introduction sentence and then my topic, or what?
this is my Topic sentence:
Having an unbreakable commitment to creating millions of new jobs, and expanding opportunity for every American in...
i'm talking about macbeth's and lady macbeth's morals. we use the hook, link and thesis. help me out with this intro, is it right? what should i edit and improve it?
As a child, you were most likely taught what is right and what is wrong. Lady Macbeth's morals altered once she saw that...
ok well the book is called
A streetcar named Desire
my topic i have to write it on is
Investigate how symbols reinforce a major theme in the play
How can I start off the introduction
...differences in math? This is how I was going to break my paper into categories.
-Emotions: students, teachers, parents
-Learning style: group work, partner, working alone
And how they learn math: using menupulatives,mind ,or fingers
We in live in a wonderful, beautiful country. The United States is filled with culture and diversity, but sadly it wasn’t always like this. There was a point in our nation’s history where different cultures were not welcomed nor tolerated. The United States was once filled with peaceful people...
school tomorrow.? I feel that my introduction paragraph is just bad. I really need someone to fix it for me. I know it's not your homework but I really need the help. I have to turn this in tomorrow for my first period class.
Poverty is more than a situation, it's a state of mind...
So I'll skip all formalities and get straight to the point;
My homework assignment is to right an essay about my future, and I have yet to decide on what to do about the introduction paragraph (I have written one but it doesn't seem to flow quite right)
I've just got a problem with actually...
am TERRIBLE at writing introduction paragraphs (actually at writing period)
we are writing an essay on a thesis that we picked out for A Separate Peace by John Knowles. the thesis i picked out is the creation of inner enemies.
for those who dont really understand its pretty much about how it is...
Can you please look this over and edit it for errors? Thanks ^^
The purpose of this lab is to identify the colour of flame different types of metals held within certain compounds create when they are held above a Bunsen burner. Eleven separate compounds will be placed over a Bunsen burner at...
Im writing a college paper and the introduction and conclusion is 3 sentences. theres like 14 word in the sentences so they are not like baby sentences.
i have to write an introduction paragraph for school and i have no idea how to start it...my essay is about personality shapes..mine is a "square" i need help (:
Please Answer.
I need a strong affective starting sentence to an introduction of an essay.
The topic is......
"Your country (wherever you live) should send troops to overseas conflicts".
I am FOR this topic all I need is a strong starting sentence.
Thanks heaps.
No sill answers.
Bangladesh Shishu Adhikar Forum has a General Body (GB), an Executive Board, and a Secretariat to carry out its mandate and activities. Presently, 263 NGOs are members of the general body. Any Bangladeshi NGO working and engaged in child rights activities is eligible for membership of Bangladesh...
fireworks? Fire works have been used for centuries to entertain people at celebrations, like the United States holiday, Fourth of July. They light up the sky with a boom, intriguing the crowd of people. In order to create such fine explosions, chemistry is used in divine ways. The chemical...
Coming in Composition II I expected the class assignments to be your typical dull English work. I thought this class was just going to assign individual tasks and prepare boring report papers that did not need our opinion. It wasn't until our "Writing Your Own Memoir" essay where I knew this...
well i'm doing an essay about the similarities and differences on Klondike Gold Rush and the California Gold Rush. I have the body and conclusion all planned out, but it's the introduction paragraph hurting it.
any tips would help me very much. many thanks!
Coming in Composition II I expected the class assignments to be your typical dull English work. I thought this class was just going to assign individual tasks and prepare boring report papers that did not need our opinion. It wasn't until our "Writing Your Own Memoir" essay where I knew this...
well i'm doing an essay about the similarities and differences on Klondike Gold Rush and the California Gold Rush. I have the body and conclusion all planned out, but it's the introduction paragraph hurting it.
any tips would help me very much. many thanks!