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  1. J

    Need help with my introduction paragraph?

    Can anyone please help me change my introduction paragraph into a conclusion paragraph? I would highly appreciate it if anyone helps me. Introduction Paragraph I am suited into becoming a film-maker because of my vast knowledge in cinema, my dedication, and my ability to impact people through...
  2. B

    Introduction paragraph for my essay?

    I have to write an essay for my english class on the novel The Great Gatsby So far this is my introduction. Plz tell me how you feel about it and what your suggestions are (i want a REALLY good grade on it.) Characters are a necessity in all stories. They are what make the story, and they are...
  3. B

    Introduction paragraph for my essay?

    I have to write an essay for my english class on the novel The Great Gatsby So far this is my introduction. Plz tell me how you feel about it and what your suggestions are (i want a REALLY good grade on it.) Characters are a necessity in all stories. They are what make the story, and they are...
  4. B

    How would I write or start an introduction paragraph for comparing two athletes?

    I am comparing Kurt Warner and Steve Nash. I have a few good points. Idk how to start this essay though. Like I was thinking of using a series of striking statements or striking questions. But i dont know how I should form the statements or questions. Any ideas, statements, or questions for my...
  5. K

    Rate my story paragraph?!?

    So any ways that I can improve & yes this is from Infinite, if you've seen one of my other questions, but it's not the whole chapter!!! Nella woke with a start. Someone was shaking her, whispering in her ear, gripping her forearm like a vice. "Open your eyes," they were whispering. Why couldn't...
  6. K

    Rate my story paragraph?!?

    So any ways that I can improve & yes this is from Infinite, if you've seen one of my other questions, but it's not the whole chapter!!! Nella woke with a start. Someone was shaking her, whispering in her ear, gripping her forearm like a vice. "Open your eyes," they were whispering. Why couldn't...
  7. K

    Rate my story paragraph?!?

    So any ways that I can improve & yes this is from Infinite, if you've seen one of my other questions, but it's not the whole chapter!!! Nella woke with a start. Someone was shaking her, whispering in her ear, gripping her forearm like a vice. "Open your eyes," they were whispering. Why couldn't...
  8. K

    !!!?Rate my paragraph?!!! =) =) =)?

    So any ways that I can improve & yes this is from Infinite, if you've seen one of my other questions, but it's not the whole chapter!!! Nella woke with a start. Someone was shaking her, whispering in her ear, gripping her forearm like a vice. "Open your eyes," the newfound pest buzzed in her...
  9. K

    !!!?Rate my paragraph?!!! =) =) =)?

    So any ways that I can improve & yes this is from Infinite, if you've seen one of my other questions, but it's not the whole chapter!!! Nella woke with a start. Someone was shaking her, whispering in her ear, gripping her forearm like a vice. "Open your eyes," the newfound pest buzzed in her...
  10. J

    can you write an introduction paragraph about migrating to a new country?

    like from india to australia or america
  11. S

    how do i start my introduction paragraph on my research paper?

    I am writing a research paper on whether or not video games support violence and just do not seem to know how to get it started and i am in desperate need of help can anyone help me get my intro started?
  12. V

    revision of my introduction paragraph to my essay please?

    “I don’t even call it violence when it’s in self defense; I call it intelligence.” were once words spoken from a significant man who played a leading role in the history of African Americans. This man was Malcolm X. An Articulate public speaker, a charismatic personality, and an indefatigable...
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    Introduction paragraph, help :)?

    Hey ! :) i have to write an essay about misconceptions about psychology and psychologists. and i would like you to tell me your opinion in the introduction paragraph (as i always find it the hardest part in any essay :P) and also if you could give me tips. Yes, English is my Second language...
  14. V

    Need help with a start off introduction paragraph on an essay please help?

    This essay is based on should physical contact be banned from schools such as high fives, hand shakes and hugs. Any ideas please let me know as well as topics I can discuss in my essay.
  15. M

    could you teach me who to write an introduction paragraph?

    Essay question: Many people feel that women make better parents than men do. Evaluate these argument and decide to what extent you agree. this is my paragraph. could you please correct it? During the growing of a child, mothers play an essential role at parenting. In view of this, the...
  16. J

    help with introduction paragraph on writting compare and contrast?

    Radio
  17. R

    Kitchen Habit POLL...How common is the following <short paragraph, I promise> ~ ?

    Kitchen Habit POLL...How common is the following <short paragraph, I promise> ~ ? You start to cook something. A certain aroma from one or more of the ingredients suddenly triggers a new and separate craving. You decide to quickly begin construction of the new thing, under the consolation that...
  18. R

    How can I make this into a introduction paragraph?

    Conflict and its consequences are an integral part of the human condition because the consequences of conflict are closely related to what we go through as human beings. It is the results of conflict which changes who we are. These can be class, racial, gender, religious, and status conflicts...
  19. J

    Please help improve this paragraph?

    When I woke up the house was silent except for the quiet swoosh of the waves outside. My bedroom overlooks the ocean and each morning I wake up to the sound of seagulls screeching over who gets the old sand-covered sandwich, the chip packet that still has some crumbs or some-other piece of...
  20. M

    I need a introduction paragraph for an essay on mercury?

    okay so my teacher wants us to right on "why mercuryis the "best" element" so i have three ideas.... -used for thermometers....-fillling teeth.... - electircal wires. i dont know how to make an awesome introduction paragraph
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