Advice on story plot?

[KatieCampbell]

I found this story idea on here about a witch who falls in love with the prince and he tries to kill her but cant then she saves him and then he saves her. Well I'm writing a more advanced concept of that story and I couldn't stand the happy ending after all she went through, he didn't deserve her so i made a more less disney version. and if thats you who wrote the story im talking about if you could email me I'd be most grateful. Anyway, basically there's this village of witches evil,evil witches but then one of there creations screws up so it makes a beautiful young powerful witch named Ethelinda. She is the witch queens daughter and surpases her mothers power. They must kill to stay alive but Ethelinda cant kill innocent people she does however kill robbers, murderers, and evil souled people. She has a best friend Fulton, a warlock and he's devistatingly handsome and he is secretly in love with her. But she meets the prince and at first she tells him to leave or she will kill him. But he continues to chase after her and she finds that shes beggining to fall in love with him. They fall in love and she hides her secret well, she later along runs away from the witch village to live in the princes kingdom. And again later on she marrys her prince and carrys his child. But on the princes birthday ball the witch queen desguses herself as a radiant beauty and attends the ball. She tells the prince of his brides secret and tells him that she has been planning on marrying him to recieve his fortune once she killed him. Ethelinda tries to deny what has been said but the witch queen pulls her to her and shows him the back of her neck, there they find the cresent moon that shows she is indeed a witch. The prince orders her to death, to be burned by the stake. They lock her in a dirt room and beat her as she protects her stomach. She still feels that he'll come for her. And even when she's being marched out to the stake she feels he'll save her. But he just sits there and watches her being tied. The witch queen still in her beautiful skin slips a poisounous leaf into teh princes cup. And as she screams out to warn hi he tells them to gag the lying slut. And as they light the fire she finally finds out that he won't save her. That there's not a single person in the world who will save her. And as the fire flares she sends the fire out in her rage not enough to hurt anyone but enough to scare them, her screams could be hurd from miles away, screams of hurt, betrayal, and frustration. And even though the fire encircled her it didn't dare touch her afterall she has been controlling the elements for years. The prince sits and watches his wife scream in the fire and raises the cup to his lips then falls. Ethelinda in desperation tore through the gag and said the spell to release her. People screamed and ran as she stepped from the fire even the gaurds. She ran to the prince and kissed him softly sucking the poison back up through his lips. And when she saw he was breathing she fled. She ran threw the forest until she heard a horse as she turned she saw Fulton on the horse behind her and at seeing him again she fell unconscious. When she wakes she wakes in a stone cottage and sees Fulton asleep in a chair. She goes and sits before him and he smiles as he wakes. He tells her that hes always loved her and he wants to remain in the cottage with her forever. That he'll raise the child as his own and together they could live happily ever after. And she agrees until a month later when Fultons gone hunting the witch queen finds her and after a magic battle sends her to a far away land where no one could ever find her. Whe the prince comes after Ethelinda realizing what a fool he's been but when he finds the witch queen she tells him shes lost to this world and forever she will be. If he would have only believe the woman he loved she'd be safe and warm in his arms He kills her before turning to search for Ethelinda and thats when the book ends and if you could give your opinion on the idea of my book and if you have any suggestions for a title that'd be great thanks!