It's nearly impossible to write you an introduction without knowing a couple of things. First of all you need to estabhlish a contention, as in what your central argument will be. Wether your for kid keeping jobs whilst in school or against and why. Then you need to tell me the information or dot points your paragraphs will be about.
The basic structure of your introduction should look like this
Opening Sentence
Introduce the prompt (essay question)
Establish your contention (main argument)
List your points
Give an approximate summary of the argument to conclude the introduction
Some parents don't like the idea of their kids keeping jobs during school. After all, will it not just keep them away from their studies? Besides, kids have their whole lives to work. What do they need a job for? I think the answer is fairly simple. It is to teach us kids responsibility.
Yes, school in itself is like a job for us younger ones but the hidden truth is this: We are not in front of our schoolbooks twenty-four hours a day. The question the parents must consider is the question: What are the kids doing when they are not doing homework? Most of the time students are kicking back and watching TV and hanging out. But is that really preparing the students for the "real world"? (You could use statics here) There are a lot of young people that are not sure about that one thing. How to face the "real world". Their friends and idols on TV are telling them to do this and that. But most of the time, it could be wrong things which can lead to high use of drugs and alcohol.
Then you can start writing about how a job can keep people busy and give them a sense of accomplishment. You could end it with the fact that feeling good about yourself (which can be accomplished through a job and knowing you have money YOU worked for) is actually the best high you can get.
I would also recommend you write something about not making the parents make the children work all the time because they do need "down time" at times.
Some parents don't like the idea of their kids keeping jobs during school. After all, will it not just keep them away from their studies? Besides, kids have their whole lives to work. What do they need a job for? I think the answer is fairly simple. It is to teach us kids responsibility.
Yes, school in itself is like a job for us younger ones but the hidden truth is this: We are not in front of our schoolbooks twenty-four hours a day. The question the parents must consider is the question: What are the kids doing when they are not doing homework? Most of the time students are kicking back and watching TV and hanging out. But is that really preparing the students for the "real world"? (You could use statics here) There are a lot of young people that are not sure about that one thing. How to face the "real world". Their friends and idols on TV are telling them to do this and that. But most of the time, it could be wrong things which can lead to high use of drugs and alcohol.
Then you can start writing about how a job can keep people busy and give them a sense of accomplishment. You could end it with the fact that feeling good about yourself (which can be accomplished through a job and knowing you have money YOU worked for) is actually the best high you can get.
I would also recommend you write something about not making the parents make the children work all the time because they do need "down time" at times.
Some parents don't like the idea of their kids keeping jobs during school. After all, will it not just keep them away from their studies? Besides, kids have their whole lives to work. What do they need a job for? I think the answer is fairly simple. It is to teach us kids responsibility.
Yes, school in itself is like a job for us younger ones but the hidden truth is this: We are not in front of our schoolbooks twenty-four hours a day. The question the parents must consider is the question: What are the kids doing when they are not doing homework? Most of the time students are kicking back and watching TV and hanging out. But is that really preparing the students for the "real world"? (You could use statics here) There are a lot of young people that are not sure about that one thing. How to face the "real world". Their friends and idols on TV are telling them to do this and that. But most of the time, it could be wrong things which can lead to high use of drugs and alcohol.
Then you can start writing about how a job can keep people busy and give them a sense of accomplishment. You could end it with the fact that feeling good about yourself (which can be accomplished through a job and knowing you have money YOU worked for) is actually the best high you can get.
I would also recommend you write something about not making the parents make the children work all the time because they do need "down time" at times.