any comments on this poem?

Alexandre

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Here
sunlight's coins are falling
silent on pale winds.

No more warmth in the metal,
gold becomes silver.

Evening song is forlorn, captive
streets listen, grimacing.

I recall hours tasted and burned,
hours of innocence loosed,

a child's last baby tooth.
 
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