Are effective atmospheric descriptions used in this short story? See details (:?

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Instead of trying to improve every aspect at once, I've decided to concentrate on certain facets of the story (using this as a first draft) and hopefully improve on my techniques.

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/rawrcookie/553102/

Any personal hints & all feedback appreciated (:
 
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