Are there Kinks in this lyrical poem?

tJellzt

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For Neonman

I think I'm illuminated
'Cos I'm hanging round here like a good poetwriterman
All around me poets are ever-trying
Till they are flying like astronauts man
I'm no better than the poets from across the ages
At their pens man
'Cos compared to laureates of the sages and the seers
I am a simple man
They know I'm so enable and able to criticize
'Cos I'm a well versed wordsmithman
Coping with the over-inundation and exponential thumbulation
Of the pretending Trolls man

I’m a spaceman, I’m a space-space man
Well I’m a spaceman
Oooooooh
I’m a spaceman I’m Neonman
Well I’m a spaceman
Don’t wanna write on the earth no more
I wanna slip the latch on a rocket door
Wanna fly away to a Martian shore
And make like a spaceman
Oooh
 
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