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I do not believe that video game promote violence. I think this because in most video games the violence shown is often unreal, and very hard to see happening in real life. Although some if it may seem very real. If we are to say that video games promote violence we must say thing like books,magazines, and the news are all factors of violence. We should have enough faith in our youth that they should follow by what is right, not what they saw in a video game. Video games are not mean to promote violence or bad behavior, and the violence in video games is not taken lightly {Thus there are so many boring time consuming warnings and rating before the game play can even begin}
Voiolence should not be blamed on video games, it should be blamed on the individual committing the crime. Because how silly would it sound in cort when ask why the actions were taken if some one were to say "I did it because of grand theft auto"?
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