Can someone help me to develop a thesis statement for this introduction?

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I need to add a thesis statement to this intro paragraph. Just to clarify everything, I am not asking of you to come up with one for me. I just simply need assistance with brainstorming ideas. I'm very new to writing essays.

I was only about to begin 2nd grade when I moved to the United States from México. My mother, Maria had been living in Minnesota for three years. She flew down to Mexico and brought my sister, Nidia and I back with her with the intention of giving us a better life. I was leaving behind everyone I loved and grew up with on top of the country I held close to my heart. A month later, I started school at Andersen Elementary in Minneapolis. I couldn’t speak a single word of English. It was difficult for me to communicate with my teachers and classmates. I was so self-conscious of my accent; I chose not to speak all that much, for fear people would make fun of me
 
i would make it something about: "the adjustment to different cultures and lifestyles"...or something that deals with that mainly...
 
Moving can be a very traumatic time for a child and it can cause a lot of stress. But imagine moving from your homeland to another country, thousands of miles away, where you dont speak the language. Then think about what it is like to start school with no friends, no knowledge about the language and no idea how to cope with all the strangers in a strange land. This is what happened to me in second grade...my family moved from Mexico to Minnesota and here is my story.

How does this sound...glad to help cause this was toooo easy!!! and u can copy this word for word if u like>
 
Everyone knows change is a part of life. However, when a young child relocates from her home in Mexico to Minnesota, the change is overwhelming. When I was younger I faced this situation and was forced to adapt culturally, verbally, and socially.

Culturely
Differences in your hometown vs MN

Verbally
Learning English

Socially
Fitting in at School

Conclusion
 
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