Can you read and comment my wattpad story?

Zeee

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/2862202-the-knights-of-five

I would really appriciate some comments and feed back :) . And yes other than grammar remarks please, i know my grammar needs work. I go back and re-read my work and fix grammar mistakes when i find some.
 
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