Drama_TeAsEr
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This is just a little fragment,I just wanted to get some feedback
I couldn't help but stare at his beautiful eyes, that were as black like that night sky. His intriguing green eyes followed me as he walked down the aisle of our towns only church, to take his seat. I could hear all the girls' murmurs from behind me, but I didn't care. I started to get a little suspicious when my little sister, Susie, stepped cautiously through the back entrance and came to sit down next to me.
When the service ended I took Susie around to the back of the church, where we always used to come as little kids. We would sit there for hours just looking across our little town. The Church was built on the highest hill, so you could see almost everything. I had always wondered if they did that knowingly.
“Why were you late?” I questioned my only sibling.
Susie answered simply, “No reason,” but I knew she wasn't telling me something.
I figured it wasn't that important, because we told each other everything. Even now, I was in my first year of college and she was a junior in high school. When I had time off of school, I would come here to visit my mothers grave. Susie and I would sit in the graveyard for hours, not talking, just listening.
I couldn't help but stare at his beautiful eyes, that were as black like that night sky. His intriguing green eyes followed me as he walked down the aisle of our towns only church, to take his seat. I could hear all the girls' murmurs from behind me, but I didn't care. I started to get a little suspicious when my little sister, Susie, stepped cautiously through the back entrance and came to sit down next to me.
When the service ended I took Susie around to the back of the church, where we always used to come as little kids. We would sit there for hours just looking across our little town. The Church was built on the highest hill, so you could see almost everything. I had always wondered if they did that knowingly.
“Why were you late?” I questioned my only sibling.
Susie answered simply, “No reason,” but I knew she wasn't telling me something.
I figured it wasn't that important, because we told each other everything. Even now, I was in my first year of college and she was a junior in high school. When I had time off of school, I would come here to visit my mothers grave. Susie and I would sit in the graveyard for hours, not talking, just listening.