(if I have something wrong please tell me where and why)
** (In my novel the whole thing is mostly about Jen and her on again off again relationship with a forbidden boy. She dates him even though he is dating her best friend)
** * *"I never thought I could love someone so much that I would lie just to be with you," Jen said avoiding his eyes.
** * * *Mark looked at her like he lost something he loved. "But _____ I have loved you since the first time I laid eyes on you..."
"It doesn't matter now I can't be with you because, well first of all I can't have a long distance relationship it's hard and I'm not that patient."
"____ trust me. Is that really the reason?" Mark said, taking her hand.
** *"What other reason is there?" She pulled away her hand.
** * *"____, told me she isn't mad at me anymore and she forgave you after one long week."
** *"I'll believe that when she says it to my face."
** *"Something about you is different."
** *Jen wondered why he changed the subject so quickly. "It's because My grandfather is alive. He faked his death... I don't want to talk about it right now." Jen said smiling with a calmer grin.
** *"Oh, I'm happy for you."
** *"Thank." Jen said looking around.
** *"So what are we going to do about us?"*Mark looked at her with hopeful eyes.
** It hurt Jen to see him look so desperate. "There is no us, keeping our relationship a secret makes what we had fake."
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** (In my novel the whole thing is mostly about Jen and her on again off again relationship with a forbidden boy. She dates him even though he is dating her best friend)
** * *"I never thought I could love someone so much that I would lie just to be with you," Jen said avoiding his eyes.
** * * *Mark looked at her like he lost something he loved. "But _____ I have loved you since the first time I laid eyes on you..."
"It doesn't matter now I can't be with you because, well first of all I can't have a long distance relationship it's hard and I'm not that patient."
"____ trust me. Is that really the reason?" Mark said, taking her hand.
** *"What other reason is there?" She pulled away her hand.
** * *"____, told me she isn't mad at me anymore and she forgave you after one long week."
** *"I'll believe that when she says it to my face."
** *"Something about you is different."
** *Jen wondered why he changed the subject so quickly. "It's because My grandfather is alive. He faked his death... I don't want to talk about it right now." Jen said smiling with a calmer grin.
** *"Oh, I'm happy for you."
** *"Thank." Jen said looking around.
** *"So what are we going to do about us?"*Mark looked at her with hopeful eyes.
** It hurt Jen to see him look so desperate. "There is no us, keeping our relationship a secret makes what we had fake."
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