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The moonlight reflected a silver glow off the empty road stretching out in front of us which was still wet from a storm yesterday.
 
:L im confused with the other answer- don't put the comma between which and was. Put it (instead) like this:

The moonlight reflected a silver glow off the empty road ,stretching out in front of us, which was still wet from a storm yesterday.
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The moonlight reflected a silver glow off the empty road stretching out in front of us, which was still wet from a storm yesterday.

you also might want to put THE storm yesterday...

You could also start a new sentence like this:

The moonlight reflected a silver glow off the empty road stretching out in front of us. It was still wet from a/the storm yesterday etc...
 
No, the comma should go between us and which, as you introduced a new element to the sentence.
 
Because of the structure it's almost a run-on. Try this:
The moonlight reflected a silver glow off of the empty road that was still wet from previous night's storm.
 
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