Does this sound like a good, brief and informative introduction for a petition to

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the provincial gov.? I'm create a proposal to the Legislative Assembly of Ontario ( A province in Canada) . I'm 14 but i am allowed to do this. How does this sound so far:

PETITION
TO The Legislative Assembly of Ontario: -
WHEREAS we citizens of Ontario, believe that it should be mandatory for Ontarians who are currently residing in government housing to take part in community service , where they will be required to pick up any misplaced garbage in their neighborhoods and dispose of them appropriately for them to keep their subsidized,government housing. We feel that the Legislative Assembly of Ontario create legislation which will enforce this.

Is that good? What should i change or add? thanks.
 
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