I know there are a billion of these on Y!A. I'm sorry, but I just need some ideas/feedback since my friends refuse to help me out, ha.
Basically, the idea I have is about a young man of about 23 named Noah. He's a quiet, introverted type, but just because he's quiet, it doesn't mean he's shy. He's kind of rude and snarky, a bit arrogant about his amount of intelligence and overall, intimidating. Noah is trying to go back to college to earn his Chemistry major (I'm thinking he already tried to get an art minor or something when he was 19. I'm still working out the details) until he gets a knock on the door from an ex-girlfriend who announces to him that he has a daughter named Layla. This sets him back because she wants him to take care of Layla with her, but he hates children... People in general, I suppose. Basically, it would be a progression of his internal struggles as he tries to adjust to the new idea... But there's a twist I can't say. : )
There's also going to be a character named Markis who's a single dad and Noah's best friend. He's Noah's role model when it comes to being a better person and father because he's more of a kind, delicate type, y'know? But I'm not sure if it's too redundant to have him as a father to a daughter as well... D;
MMM. OK THAT'S ALL~. I'm sorry it's so long, but feedback would be much appreciated. Also, what point of view should it be written in if it's an okay concept? I can't choose if first or third would be better for this kind of 'story'.
Thank you in advance guys. I love you and have a fantastic day!
Basically, the idea I have is about a young man of about 23 named Noah. He's a quiet, introverted type, but just because he's quiet, it doesn't mean he's shy. He's kind of rude and snarky, a bit arrogant about his amount of intelligence and overall, intimidating. Noah is trying to go back to college to earn his Chemistry major (I'm thinking he already tried to get an art minor or something when he was 19. I'm still working out the details) until he gets a knock on the door from an ex-girlfriend who announces to him that he has a daughter named Layla. This sets him back because she wants him to take care of Layla with her, but he hates children... People in general, I suppose. Basically, it would be a progression of his internal struggles as he tries to adjust to the new idea... But there's a twist I can't say. : )
There's also going to be a character named Markis who's a single dad and Noah's best friend. He's Noah's role model when it comes to being a better person and father because he's more of a kind, delicate type, y'know? But I'm not sure if it's too redundant to have him as a father to a daughter as well... D;
MMM. OK THAT'S ALL~. I'm sorry it's so long, but feedback would be much appreciated. Also, what point of view should it be written in if it's an okay concept? I can't choose if first or third would be better for this kind of 'story'.
Thank you in advance guys. I love you and have a fantastic day!